Up for a dance?

Ringing doorbell, raging heartbeats as the longing finds a closure,
She looks for her in every corner as the knocks become harder,
A smell so known grips her imagination,
Her face so clear in her mind, as she approaches the door,
A little window between their fantasies,
Back to the time when they found each other,
One smiling selflessly between a bunch of friends,
Another sitting silently in a corner sipping her drink,
Love clinked and how…

Chilling stares in a pub full of couples with locked lips,
They sensed each other through eye language dripped,
Devouring each tune in the backdrop to reach out for the other,
It wasn’t just love at the first sight, it was love beyond a parallel,
As the beats became faster, distance just lesser,
Their bodies, breath, skin almost in contact,
Two girls in their mid-twenties suddenly the center of attention,
Seductive dance, stares without a blink, hands clutched tight,
The vibe set on flames, another level high to sustain,
As one of them bit the other’s earlobe as a part of the step,
The message came across that love wasn’t anymore scared…

Hours passed by, neither the music stopped nor did the bar,
Tonight was an exception with admirers of true love so far,
Fearless, fierce and up on the floor, sparks flew as they mastered the high,
A reassuring look, a hug from the back & how the tied bun sighed,
Skies turned red as they leaned in for a kiss, peck on the cheek too, bonus,
Beyond the stereotypes and cages of the world, these angels’ chorus,
The on-lookers clapped and kissed their partners, to the club owner’s surprise,
There it was, justice. Above the maybes and despite.

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  1. Ruchi Verma September 13, 2017 @ 3:32 pm

    Dancing is passion and you have written it beautifully !!
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    • adodani September 13, 2017 @ 3:40 pm

      Thank you so much, Ruchi πŸ™‚ Glad you liked it.

  2. Shamik September 13, 2017 @ 4:09 pm

    How nice the poetry is… Loved reading it…
    The passion for dance blended with love and affection make it even more attractive!!
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    • adodani September 13, 2017 @ 4:33 pm

      Thank you so much, Shamik. πŸ™‚

  3. Vinay Leo R. September 13, 2017 @ 4:41 pm

    Lovely poem, very passionate like the dance. πŸ™‚ Though I think I liked the poem I read on my last visit a little more!
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    • adodani September 13, 2017 @ 4:47 pm

      Honesty is gold. Thank you, Vinay πŸ™‚

  4. U K September 14, 2017 @ 10:40 am

    Wow..I am impressed..seriously. πŸ™‚
    Keep up the good work and keep posting regularly.
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    • adodani September 14, 2017 @ 10:44 am

      Thank you so much, Utpal πŸ™‚ I am glad you liked it. I shall post regularly.

  5. Bellybytes September 14, 2017 @ 9:16 pm

    Pardon my ignorance but are you talking about a lesbian bar? Or just two girls dancing?
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    • adodani September 15, 2017 @ 11:01 am

      A bar where two people discover each other and fall in love. Yes, lesbian πŸ™‚

  6. anupriya September 14, 2017 @ 11:12 pm

    You have beautifully expressed the chemistry when a common interest or passion brings two people together. Its magical.
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    • adodani September 15, 2017 @ 10:59 am

      Thank you so much, Anupriya πŸ™‚ Glad you could relate.

  7. keerthi vydyula September 15, 2017 @ 12:49 am

    Is my imagination passionate or is it the magic of those words that sparked my imagination. I guess it is the later!
    Must say, I loved each and every line of it. Each line is as intense and passionate as the two people who are in love. Irrespective of gender irrespective of these so called stereotypes of society; Love flourishes and wins eventually!
    You made my day…Thanks for sharing this amazing poem πŸ˜€

    • adodani September 15, 2017 @ 11:00 am

      Thank you so very much, Keerthi. I am so glad you loved it πŸ™‚

  8. Akshata September 15, 2017 @ 1:15 pm

    Love is far above caste, creed, religion, gender. The love between 2 women who share the passion for dance has been wonderfully portrayed
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    • adodani September 15, 2017 @ 1:19 pm

      Thank you so much, Akshata πŸ™‚ Glad you liked it.

  9. Disha September 15, 2017 @ 1:15 pm

    Reminds me of the quote – ‘Dance like no one is watching’. Beautifully potrayed feeling of love!
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    • adodani September 15, 2017 @ 1:19 pm

      Thank you, Disha πŸ™‚

  10. Shalini September 20, 2017 @ 10:19 am

    Wow! Dancing is one thing I absolutely am passionate about! This poem is just brilliant; especially because of the slight twist about two women. Write more, Ashu πŸ™‚
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    • adodani September 20, 2017 @ 11:06 am

      I always will. Thank you, Shalini πŸ™‚

  11. Radhika September 20, 2017 @ 3:15 pm

    Love above the maybes and despite. Now that’s a good line.

    • adodani September 21, 2017 @ 10:48 am

      πŸ™‚ Yay

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