At Some Point of Time

There’s a story hidden in you,
Every time you smile, laugh and cry,
Don’t hide it for it doesn’t deserve to be hidden,
At some point of time, life will force you to spit out,
In forms unknown and you will have to narrate…

A trip to remember, a scar to show,
A blinked eye at midnight, tad too much mar to blow,
This imagination is a gift for you, Oh Artist!
At some point of time, life will pat your back and you
shall remember,
Rains, winter, summer and snow…

You bleed umpteen times, I know,
But for all you have spoken, the stage seems hollow,
You are not just a character,
your purpose is bigger, all you have to know,
At some point of time, life will gift you with
every thing you want,
Accept it with open arms, don’t Abort…

The canvas is huge, the trumpet is slow,
To the tunes of consequences, just try
to hold on for a while,
You are near; very, to the final performance,
At some point of time, life will snatch all
that you have got,
Relax, release and with the hands of clock,
just seamlessly flow…

Sleepless nights, a box full of thoughts,
When you were a child, that soiled diaper couldn’t swap,
Those uncalled situations not everyone knew,
At some point of time, life will help you grow,
Learn, spread the word and be a friend
to your soul…

The conclusions in your mind are not always right,
Some beginnings strike like a ripped coat & knife,
For you and I are not alone,
At some point of time, life will make you realize
the worth of human kind,
Agree or disagree, just never cross the line…

22 Comments, RSS

  1. Shalini September 6, 2017 @ 2:50 pm

    I’m in awe! Bas. 🙂
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    • adodani September 6, 2017 @ 2:54 pm

      Yayy! 🙂

  2. Leo September 8, 2017 @ 10:35 am

    Beautiful. Each moment is a story, and deserves to be recognized. 🙂 Not each moment has to become a written poem or story though.

    “The conclusions in your mind are not always right”

    So many people don’t realize this and hold on to that conclusion like it’s 1234% correct.

    I will return to read more poetry soon. 🙂
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    • adodani September 8, 2017 @ 11:05 am

      Absolutely. It’s so subjective, no? Appreciate your visit and perspective. Yes, a lot of poetry awaits you here 😉 Thank you.

    • adodani September 8, 2017 @ 11:51 am

      Means a lot 🙂 Thank you so much.

  3. Mayuri Nidigallu September 8, 2017 @ 12:35 pm

    This is beautiful, Ashwini. There is a lot to be read between the lines as well. Profound thoughts.
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    • adodani September 8, 2017 @ 12:45 pm

      Thank you, Mayuri 🙂

  4. Ruchi Verma September 8, 2017 @ 3:44 pm

    You know ..u r great poet !! keep writing
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    • adodani September 8, 2017 @ 3:47 pm

      Thanks a lot, Ruchi 🙂

  5. Dixita September 8, 2017 @ 9:43 pm

    Beautiful poetry.
    I loved the beginning and conclusion.
    We should enjoy lifebut conditions apply came out nicely

    • adodani September 11, 2017 @ 11:26 am

      Thank you, Dixita. Glad you loved it 🙂

  6. Charu Gujjal September 8, 2017 @ 11:23 pm

    This is a beautiful poetic piece. Loved the last stanza. So meaningful and deep.

    • adodani September 11, 2017 @ 11:24 am

      Thank you, Charu. Glad you liked it 🙂

  7. Manisha Garg September 9, 2017 @ 12:52 pm

    Its a very positive poem. I know life is doing what you believe it and not lose hopes. Sometimes you don’t have the energy to complete it however, this poem motivates to pick your bags and restart.

    • adodani September 11, 2017 @ 11:21 am

      That’s amazing. I am glad my piece could ignite that spark. Thanks a lot for all the visits.

  8. Reema D'souza September 10, 2017 @ 10:21 am

    This was so beautiful! Each line had so much to tell!
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    • adodani September 11, 2017 @ 11:14 am

      Thank you so much, Reema. And congratulations on your feat, 100 poems 100 days. That’s one big thing 🙂 Loved all the few I got to read. Keep writing, please.

  9. Minakshi bajpai September 11, 2017 @ 8:36 pm

    Your poetry is very beautifully written. And I just love to read poems with great ryhimg words. Keep it up writing like this always.

    • adodani September 12, 2017 @ 11:20 am

      Thank you 🙂

  10. Radhika September 20, 2017 @ 3:24 pm

    I think the idea that this poem is trying to bring out is a great one and with a little refinement it could reach very good height in terms of impact.

    • adodani September 21, 2017 @ 10:47 am

      Thank you, appreciate your inputs radhe 🙂

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