16. Oh, The Wonderful Feeling To be Loved!

Have you been loved enough?
Who defines how much is sufficient?
The feeling to be held,
The way we kiss our happy tears,
Oh, the wonderful feeling to be loved,
In highs and lows,
How we, to each other take a bow,
Celebrating small joys,
Initiating interesting conversations,
The sweet intimacy of eyes,
The beautiful feeling of reprise,
Connection which instills faith in our hearts,
Trust which makes a way to our beliefs,
Those inhibitions we try to get rid of,
A pile of regrets which makes living hard,
Yet the determination to keep going on,
A blessed feeling to have a back,
Shoulders where we can simply relax,
The favorite corner of our mind,
Where dreams and desires rejoice,
To the point where vulnerability is not a weakness,
Breaking down is not a shun,
Dancing to the tunes of togetherness,
Making sure hands are held,
All the attended moments of swell,
Coming back to the same room of thoughts,
Kindness and humility tops,
Persistence enough to be recalled,
Reaffirmations decorating the silent falls,
Oh, the wonderful feeling to be loved,
Oh, the wonderful feeling to be loved!

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8 Comments, RSS

  1. Seema Wadhwa November 16, 2016 @ 4:24 pm

    Thank you for writing like this, makes us all smile in the middle of a chaotic day 🙂
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    • adodani November 16, 2016 @ 5:02 pm

      Glad my work helps 🙂 Thanks, Seem.

  2. CREATIVE LIFE STAR November 16, 2016 @ 5:57 pm

    Beautifully penned

    • adodani November 16, 2016 @ 6:46 pm

      Thanks, Humaira 🙂

  3. Amrita Basu November 16, 2016 @ 7:58 pm

    Yes that’s the kind of lover I am blessed to live with you.Ashwini this is a beautiful poem.
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    • adodani November 17, 2016 @ 10:54 am

      Thank you so much, Amrita. Glad you liked it 🙂

  4. Shalini R November 19, 2016 @ 12:09 am

    Each word! Ha! Kudos! I am so so so in love with your poem! <3

    • adodani November 20, 2016 @ 5:01 pm

      Oh, it comes from the heart is bound to make a way 🙂

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