Redemption

Rejoice, the curtains have dropped,

The artist in you can relax,

No pressure, no targets, no blames,

Consider yourself free, the devil said…

 

Free of sins, full of forgiveness, yet caged,

I know what you have gone through, child,

I don’t say I can understand, but I empathize,

Oh, beautiful soul, there’s no one rescued…

 

Walk away, pause, speed, I have given you controls,

Misuse though, don’t,

Trust is the factor everyone banks upon,

And I have always trusted you in entirety…

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Mistakes are a part of life, crime is not,

Crime maybe punishable yet it teaches you a lot,

Learn from every ounce is why I sent you on planet earth,

Come back to me when you have had it enough…

 

Forgiveness is a talent, nurture,

Beauty is a moment, cherish,

Humility is a boon, build,

Togetherness is a blessing, relish,

Friendship is a reality, believe,

And in every moment you feel frail,

Rather than chanting my name, introspect,

nourish your soul, change yourself for good,

for I am your biggest fan, I am your toughest boss…

Picture Courtesy: http://shahabalizadeh.deviantart.com/art/Tree-of-Redemption-366330661 

31 Comments, RSS

  1. Dixita September 2, 2016 @ 11:13 am

    Such deep connection with words that a poem came so nice 🙂
    Good luck #MyFriendAlexa
    And looking ages for more such poetries .they are creative

    • adodani September 6, 2016 @ 2:56 pm

      Thank you for reading and commenting. 🙂

  2. Ranjini September 11, 2016 @ 12:44 am

    Beautifully constructed and well chosen words 🙂 Very deep

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:23 pm

      Thank you, Ranjini 🙂

  3. Novemberschild September 11, 2016 @ 1:58 pm

    Your poem is amazing, a masterpiece of resonating words a feeling. I am really enjoying reading your poetry, you are very talented.

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:23 pm

      Thank you so much. Really appreciate your time, reading and appreciation 🙂

  4. Neha Kapoor September 11, 2016 @ 1:59 pm

    Love this, Ashwini

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:24 pm

      Thank you, Neha 🙂

  5. Saumy Nagayach September 11, 2016 @ 2:21 pm

    Such a beautiful poem,Anshu! Written in such a poised manner 🙂 Keep writing! 🙂

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:24 pm

      Thank you so much for appreciating my work. 🙂 Cheers.

  6. Deepa September 11, 2016 @ 2:28 pm

    Good one..”come back to me when you had it enough”..nice!

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:26 pm

      Thank you for reading and commenting, Deepa 🙂

  7. SHALINI BAISIWALA September 11, 2016 @ 3:28 pm

    Whoa! very deep and seriously thought provoking poem. Love the interplay of words. Cheers

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:26 pm

      Thank you so much Shalini, for reading, commenting and appreciating 🙂

  8. Aditi September 11, 2016 @ 3:55 pm

    Wow! Such truth in those lines, and important message. Need for forgiveness, for introspection…beautifully penned!

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:27 pm

      Well, yes.Thank you, Aditi 🙂

  9. Omkar Jadhav September 11, 2016 @ 9:21 pm

    Brilliantly composed Ashu. I loved it, the devil narrative especially, was beautiful.

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:27 pm

      Thank you, Omkar for reading and sharing what you liked 🙂 Cheers bro.

  10. Ramya Rao September 11, 2016 @ 9:44 pm

    This is such a deep and powerful poem,Ashu. Beautifully penned. 🙂

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:28 pm

      Thank you, Ramya for reading and commenting 🙂 Cheers

  11. Reema D'Souza September 11, 2016 @ 10:44 pm

    Such deep meaning in these words ! Beautifully written !

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:29 pm

      Thank you so much, Reema. Means a lot 🙂

  12. Aditi Mathur Kumar September 11, 2016 @ 11:31 pm

    Beautiful.
    Read it twice.

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:29 pm

      Thank you, Aditi. Appreciate it 🙂

  13. upasna September 11, 2016 @ 11:34 pm

    Lovely Poem it is…Loved the spiritual element.

    • adodani September 19, 2016 @ 9:12 am

      Thank you, Upasna 🙂

  14. Manisha Garg September 12, 2016 @ 12:01 pm

    perfect usage of words..nice poem…Happy to connect #zarahatkeblogreads

  15. Manisha Garg September 12, 2016 @ 12:02 pm

    perfect usage of words..wonderfully written…Happy to connect #zarahatkeblogreads

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:28 pm

      Thank you, Manisha 🙂

  16. Aseem September 12, 2016 @ 3:08 pm

    That’s a really beautiful poem. Many life’s lessons out there :).

    • adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:28 pm

      Thank you, Aseem 🙂

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