Rejoice, the curtains have dropped,
The artist in you can relax,
No pressure, no targets, no blames,
Consider yourself free, the devil said…
Free of sins, full of forgiveness, yet caged,
I know what you have gone through, child,
I don’t say I can understand, but I empathize,
Oh, beautiful soul, there’s no one rescued…
Walk away, pause, speed, I have given you controls,
Misuse though, don’t,
Trust is the factor everyone banks upon,
And I have always trusted you in entirety…
Mistakes are a part of life, crime is not,
Crime maybe punishable yet it teaches you a lot,
Learn from every ounce is why I sent you on planet earth,
Come back to me when you have had it enough…
Forgiveness is a talent, nurture,
Beauty is a moment, cherish,
Humility is a boon, build,
Togetherness is a blessing, relish,
Friendship is a reality, believe,
And in every moment you feel frail,
Rather than chanting my name, introspect,
nourish your soul, change yourself for good,
for I am your biggest fan, I am your toughest boss…
Picture Courtesy:Β http://shahabalizadeh.deviantart.com/art/Tree-of-Redemption-366330661Β
Dixita September 2, 2016 @ 11:13 am
Such deep connection with words that a poem came so nice π
Good luck #MyFriendAlexa
And looking ages for more such poetries .they are creative
adodani September 6, 2016 @ 2:56 pm
Thank you for reading and commenting. π
Ranjini September 11, 2016 @ 12:44 am
Beautifully constructed and well chosen words π Very deep
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:23 pm
Thank you, Ranjini π
Novemberschild September 11, 2016 @ 1:58 pm
Your poem is amazing, a masterpiece of resonating words a feeling. I am really enjoying reading your poetry, you are very talented.
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:23 pm
Thank you so much. Really appreciate your time, reading and appreciation π
Neha Kapoor September 11, 2016 @ 1:59 pm
Love this, Ashwini
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:24 pm
Thank you, Neha π
Saumy Nagayach September 11, 2016 @ 2:21 pm
Such a beautiful poem,Anshu! Written in such a poised manner π Keep writing! π
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:24 pm
Thank you so much for appreciating my work. π Cheers.
Deepa September 11, 2016 @ 2:28 pm
Good one..”come back to me when you had it enough”..nice!
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:26 pm
Thank you for reading and commenting, Deepa π
SHALINI BAISIWALA September 11, 2016 @ 3:28 pm
Whoa! very deep and seriously thought provoking poem. Love the interplay of words. Cheers
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:26 pm
Thank you so much Shalini, for reading, commenting and appreciating π
Aditi September 11, 2016 @ 3:55 pm
Wow! Such truth in those lines, and important message. Need for forgiveness, for introspection…beautifully penned!
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:27 pm
Well, yes.Thank you, Aditi π
Omkar Jadhav September 11, 2016 @ 9:21 pm
Brilliantly composed Ashu. I loved it, the devil narrative especially, was beautiful.
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:27 pm
Thank you, Omkar for reading and sharing what you liked π Cheers bro.
Ramya Rao September 11, 2016 @ 9:44 pm
This is such a deep and powerful poem,Ashu. Beautifully penned. π
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:28 pm
Thank you, Ramya for reading and commenting π Cheers
Reema D'Souza September 11, 2016 @ 10:44 pm
Such deep meaning in these words ! Beautifully written !
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:29 pm
Thank you so much, Reema. Means a lot π
Aditi Mathur Kumar September 11, 2016 @ 11:31 pm
Beautiful.
Read it twice.
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:29 pm
Thank you, Aditi. Appreciate it π
upasna September 11, 2016 @ 11:34 pm
Lovely Poem it is…Loved the spiritual element.
adodani September 19, 2016 @ 9:12 am
Thank you, Upasna π
Manisha Garg September 12, 2016 @ 12:01 pm
perfect usage of words..nice poem…Happy to connect #zarahatkeblogreads
Manisha Garg September 12, 2016 @ 12:02 pm
perfect usage of words..wonderfully written…Happy to connect #zarahatkeblogreads
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:28 pm
Thank you, Manisha π
Aseem September 12, 2016 @ 3:08 pm
That’s a really beautiful poem. Many life’s lessons out there :).
adodani September 14, 2016 @ 12:28 pm
Thank you, Aseem π