Learn

In the moments of pain
In release of that gain
With every possible night
And sunshine which stays
Learn, you have got much more to learn..

Inspiration is all around
Success is another gate
Humility shall take you through
While you collect memories galore
Learn, you have got much more to learn..

Struggle makes you tougher
Love makes you calm
Sleeplessness makes you value
Emotions so deep
Learn, you have got much more to learn..

Not every king deserved the throne
Not everyone who slogs, the nightmare
Unknown to life’s uncanny lessons
And tribute to every breath
Learn, you have got much more to learn..

Travel those clouds of fear
Let it rain healing, your smile smear
You are not alone, not left out, not hollow
Turn the page around, because
Learn, you have got much more to learn..

Years shall pass by and you will laugh
Flashbacks of misery & surrendered graph
Dots will connect, stories will complete
Another day will begin & you will realize
Learn, you have got much more to learn..

3 Comments, RSS

  1. 3.14-eater July 15, 2015 @ 7:48 am

    It's a beautiful idea. I would've like to see two things:

    1. choice of words that fit the lines even better
    2. A slow growing positivity leaving the reader at the end of the verses in a more cheerful and 'go for it' frame of mind rather than a contemplative and broad view that you've given to it.

    My takeaway from this is the line,"travel those clouds of fear".

    Good work. Can be better.

  2. 3.14-eater July 15, 2015 @ 7:49 am

    *liked

  3. Ashwini Dodani July 15, 2015 @ 8:03 am

    Thanks, Radhe. For always being a quick consistent reader and providing honest feedback. You be the best 🙂

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