Candle Couple

As equal as a standing tree
As bearing as a fruit could be
As melting as the snow capped mountains appear
As beautiful as the nature sheer
As awed as a happy moment
As flawed as a regretted torment
As remembered as a happy memory
As hurting as the sad melody
As wanted as a desire blue
As needed as breathed clue
As informative as a book read
As huge as a library fed
As loved as the soul in a body
As beaten as a bleeding heartbeat
As hopeless as an optimist free
As faithful as a broken spree
As surrendering as a bail’s plea
As repenting as agonized guilty
As accepted as a mother’s lap
As rejected as a successful trap
As endless as this poem could be
The only thankful emotion that would be

4 Comments, RSS

  1. Aditi May 31, 2013 @ 2:00 pm

    Simple and beautiful…

    I loved it… read it slowly so that each line could sink in and it felt as if each line was a poetry in itself…

  2. ravenousforlife May 31, 2013 @ 2:23 pm

    Gracias. πŸ™‚

    You wanted to write more no? The poem has a sudden ending. Or maybe I wanted to read more of it!

  3. piyush gaur May 31, 2013 @ 6:55 pm

    Sugoi :):)

  4. varsha kalyani June 1, 2013 @ 6:22 pm

    this is an extraordinary piece πŸ™‚ marvellous.. pleasure reading this one.

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