Yes, I am proud to be a daughter

This post is a special dedication to every girl/lady/woman who is a daughter, and not just a daughter but a special daughter of God.

Since the drop of existence I am asked,
Since the check I am meant to be masked,
Since the determination in the flask,
A doubt remains always and they assign the task..

Sometimes successful but the other times I embrace the world,
Every moment I am questioned and named family’s Respect,
What freedom means to me is nothing means to the world,
What I want to live as, is always a disregard..

I manage, I exist, though in barriers and those worded arms,
They scare me about the relevance still sound so irrelevant,
I am not a show piece, I am not a mere creature,
Leave me alone, don’t name me a social stigma..

That proud collar and Those million dollar smiles I bring,
Those trophies, Those certificates, Those currency within,
Goes to the same cupboard of narrow mindedness,
When they come to know, a girl, Just because..

They say you are not secure then teach me to protect,
They say you are unsafe then teach to me fight,
They disown me for no fault of mine,
Is this the day why every ladder I climbed?

We know that thoughts become words and words actions,
We know actions and change come from our home,
So today if you have or are that beautiful confident girl,
Stand out for yourself, say, “I am way too strong.”

Today in this civilized society where we all know that most of us are educated, the real education comes only when we open our minds, fight for our rights, teach our girls that they are no way of disrespect to them and build self confidence in them. We say charity begins at our home so not in the name of charity but even if you want to feel a bit responsible about yourself tell your daughter you love them, you are proud of them and whatever they have done in their life is not wasted. Also as a daughter if you are reading this, as girl/lady/woman if you are reading this, be proud of yourself because no one can ever discourage you or make you feel bad till you know that you were meant to be.

21 Comments, RSS

  1. Aditi December 27, 2012 @ 4:34 pm

    I write this with moist eyes…
    Just loved it ashu… Awesome…

  2. Kriti Kandhari December 27, 2012 @ 4:39 pm

    Salutes with utmost respect!! Really impressive Ashi…I am proud to have you as my bestest friend forever πŸ™‚

  3. piyush chudasama December 27, 2012 @ 4:43 pm

    Loved it simply awsome

  4. Irfan December 27, 2012 @ 4:43 pm

    The magician and his words are at its masterclass best… So thought provoking… RESPECT!!! So proud to call you brother… I wish every Indian reads this and embraces it whole heartedly…

  5. Dishank Devluk December 27, 2012 @ 5:20 pm

    And this is why I call you my favourite poet.
    "Awesome" is not a word for this post.
    Salute to you & your thoughts, loved it so much.

  6. nipathbelani December 27, 2012 @ 5:34 pm

    Hardcore. To the point. Well written. Keep it up bro πŸ™‚

  7. piyush gaur December 27, 2012 @ 5:35 pm

    Bhai tu rula ke hi manega.

  8. Ankit Sharma December 27, 2012 @ 5:37 pm

    Wonderfully written… If only it brings senses to those Animals who forgot what respect is..

  9. Shriti December 27, 2012 @ 5:42 pm

    It's beautiful. Omg. <3
    Loved every word of it.. You are amazing. <3

  10. sneha mehta December 27, 2012 @ 6:00 pm


    I love the way you think. We don't have to be modern or western this is time to be revolutionary. It is not just a poem, just a message.. it is something we should not even think but simply follow.

    If we sit and wait for the right time, it might not come but the time is now and here and now we should change..

    Lets be the revolution.

  11. Pooja Maurya December 27, 2012 @ 6:34 pm

    Each sentence is so purely true.
    You own perfection.
    I completely loved it. God bless you.

  12. God's Child December 27, 2012 @ 6:35 pm

    Very thought provoking !

  13. Rutaba Tariq December 27, 2012 @ 6:55 pm

    Talk about a gorgeously embedded message within even beautiful words.
    You're right about 'change' coming from our own houses, within minds.

    'Aiwayn Rooz Shaytaan Naal Lardaan
    Kadee Nafs Apnay Naal Larrya Ee Nai'
    We fight the devil daily, but we never fight our own nerves/conscious. (rough translation).
    When we won't fight ourselves , how will we improve?

    Incredibly written and I can only give you my prayers. πŸ™‚
    God bless.

  14. Suruchi December 27, 2012 @ 7:04 pm

    If only more people felt like you, The daughter, the girl could be more of what she truly is capable of.

    Wonderful Ashu πŸ™‚

  15. Arpita December 28, 2012 @ 4:05 am

    Be the change you wanna see…its just awesome πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ lets take a first step towards the revolution

  16. Shailesh Thorat December 28, 2012 @ 7:06 am

    Lovely mate, simply super πŸ™‚

  17. Aparajita Singh December 28, 2012 @ 7:33 am

    Time has changed but people's mentality hasn't. At sometime or the other, when such happenings happen people tend to think that it's all girls' fault. I don't know why. Only if they widen their minds.

    Just loved your post Ashu. Lots of respect for you. πŸ™‚

  18. Shiuli December 28, 2012 @ 2:23 pm

    Respect is the only word that my mind conjures up after reading this. Lots of love πŸ™‚

  19. Hiren Chauhan December 28, 2012 @ 4:25 pm

    Beautiful. Touches heart. Respect is the word Ashu.

  20. writersrelam December 28, 2012 @ 5:24 pm

    Beautifully Written, Simply Superb.

  21. Prerna Subramanian January 2, 2013 @ 10:41 am

    Beautiful. and thanks for commenting on my blogpost. Keep reading. And I will keep reading your posts, because they are simply beautiful and sublime.

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