Illuminated Heights

Finding beauty in your conceited smile, I lost myself,
Brimming sorcery coming with delight, I found me somewhere..

Moving in the thoughts of togetherness, waited for thee,
A smothered feeling of commotion, made me walk away free..

Every path had thorns and you did warn me through, I walked,
Broken, Fallen, Messed, I got up with a hangover stalked..

The pain in the veins and that rush of white blood, I went wasted,
In every forested dream we walked, I had we, tasted..

A measure to the journey atrocious, I can’t see you fallen,
Still the words have to do the justice, come back to me, I am swollen..

A plea, Some love, Some heart outs, They fly, I want you nearby,
Tonight the moon, The breeze don’t soothe, voraciously, I die..

14 Comments, RSS

  1. Kriti Kandhari December 17, 2012 @ 5:27 pm

    So much depth yar!! gud wrk!

  2. camouflagedwhispers December 17, 2012 @ 5:31 pm

    Profound! Also, what does 'white blood' imply?

  3. 3.14-eater December 17, 2012 @ 5:32 pm

    I like the last line… why the title though?

  4. Ankit Sharma December 17, 2012 @ 5:37 pm

    Amazing word play! loved the usage of some words in this post!

  5. sneha mehta December 17, 2012 @ 5:41 pm

    🙂 Deep Awesome

  6. Shailesh Thorat December 17, 2012 @ 6:24 pm

    'Illuminated Heights', lovely man 🙂 The end is super, Bahu Saras Che 🙂

  7. Shraviii December 17, 2012 @ 7:29 pm

    A fine piece of work… Njoy reading such masterpieces =)

  8. Arpita December 18, 2012 @ 3:51 am

    ahh deep and awesome 🙂 🙂 mast keep writing

  9. Hiren Chauhan December 18, 2012 @ 8:26 am

    Awesome, specially the way words are used. (Though, I had to search meaning of 1 or 2 in dictionary :P), but yes, loved it. Meaningful Ashu 🙂

  10. Suruchi December 18, 2012 @ 11:01 am

    Heart wrenching Ashu…rising from sweet depths of the pain of love 🙂

  11. Rutaba Tariq December 20, 2012 @ 7:37 am

    You are talented,I hope you know that cause you truly are. I feel what you write and that is something which proves you write from your heart.

  12. Saheli December 30, 2012 @ 8:17 am

    One of my favourites.

  13. Phoenix February 7, 2013 @ 11:20 am

    A plea, Some love, Some heart outs, They fly, I want you nearby,
    Tonight the moon, The breeze don't soothe, voraciously, I die..

    words that resonated with the core of my being… beautiful..almost ethereal..

  14. ravenousforlife February 27, 2013 @ 3:59 am

    I see a shade of melancholy and beautiful desperation in this one. Rarely does that combo turn out so well!

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