Consumed…

A story of
the grown up though
incomplete and vague..

A page of
the book of law
not followed the outrage..

A bit more loved
and tad too sad was the
story of his game..

A made up mind
the world unkind and
finding a way out to salvage..

A rush of love
he found in his teenage
and lost it soon..

An adult intimacy valued not
and converted to
numbness..

Now what he does is work just
and restless
to his core being heartless..

A human he was and
turned in to
beast of a kind ruthless..

He popped some pills
and tried slitting
but no cure to his pains..

Finally he got his way
to Life which said
the “Try Wasn’t Enough, Mate”..

7 Comments, RSS

  1. Himani September 17, 2012 @ 8:05 am

    Awesome 🙂

  2. Aditi September 17, 2012 @ 8:06 am

    what emotions dear…
    Its beautifully sad…
    Giving up is not easy but at times we dont have any option.
    The flow is lovely…
    And I really liked how u paragraphed it in 3 lines… =)

    lotsa love.. And keep it up dear… =)

  3. Dishank Devluk September 17, 2012 @ 8:21 am

    "Try Wasn't Enough, Mate" – loved it
    Beautifully written

  4. Zeal Shah September 17, 2012 @ 9:14 am

    Just one word for your stupendous effort-Amazing
    Very nicely written & emotions depicted are simply awesome <3<3

  5. Shailesh Thorat September 17, 2012 @ 12:46 pm

    Ah, another beauty from the poet's heart. Lovely 🙂

  6. writersrelam September 17, 2012 @ 3:18 pm

    very Well written mate.. Shows Emotions really well, Not to forget mentioning, the choice of words & flow was amazing as well..

  7. amit kumar pandey September 17, 2012 @ 6:39 pm

    no other words i have rather than saying " just awesome "

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