Aloof in The Darkness of Truth

A boy he was, a man he became
A toy he played, a joy of fame
He knew it had to come, loner he was,
Faced the life, with proper acclaim.

Helped he all, a better human be,
Whenever he wanted, got a bit of glee,
Thankful he was, prayed did he,
For the betterment of the humanity.

Togetherness to value, a love he lost,
Friendship and betrayal, was a part,
Belief still there, hope not lost,
Hugged he, the supreme so class.

Performed he, in every way he could,
Got the credit, and saved everything he should,
To have a life of merriment, he tried tad too much,
But got he was, a light at the end of tunnel.

12 Comments, RSS

  1. Aditi September 9, 2012 @ 10:34 am

    Story of a life spent well…
    but the rewards are such that needs to be patiently waited for…
    a very well versed poem my dear…
    keep it up…
    keep up the good work…
    keep up the good life…

  2. Dishank Devluk September 9, 2012 @ 10:35 am

    Good one Ashu
    Appropriate heading

  3. writersrelam September 9, 2012 @ 11:57 am

    Loved the title of the Poem and the Poem itself shaped pretty well.. Nice one altogether..

  4. amit kumar pandey September 9, 2012 @ 5:25 pm

    the last part…what a finish to a successful life…awesome buddy…!!

  5. Saya September 9, 2012 @ 5:37 pm

    Where dp you get inspiration from to write such amazing poems! Loved it! πŸ™‚

  6. Himani September 9, 2012 @ 6:16 pm

    Awesome.. Yes there is always light at the end of the tunnel .. you just have to be strong enough to get there! πŸ™‚

  7. nishi September 10, 2012 @ 6:41 am

    Well done and nicely written.

  8. mahimakukreja September 10, 2012 @ 7:00 am

    Nice stuff. The person is you in the poem, totally, that's how you are too. πŸ™‚

  9. NIKHIL THE CRIC FAN September 10, 2012 @ 7:46 am

    The last line caps off the meaning of life πŸ™‚ Very well written Ashwin πŸ™‚ Look forward to read all of your poems πŸ™‚

  10. Shailesh Thorat September 10, 2012 @ 9:20 am

    Beutiful poem mate, my words won't do justice as a compliment. just saying, Amazing verses you write man. keep it up. πŸ™‚

  11. Arpita September 10, 2012 @ 12:05 pm

    A life tail flew along the time veil …gained color gained shape n picture it took and became a story πŸ™‚ …..beautiful aashu πŸ™‚

  12. Mirchi Laddoo September 13, 2012 @ 6:44 am

    Superb..You know I pictured you while reading this πŸ™‚

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