Tired of saying Miss you

Opening eyes, they ask for your light,
Rubbed glance, a pinch of your sight,
Yawn says, kiss me much,
The start of the day, miss you much.

Getting ready, a sure of your touch,
A temporary good bye, asks for the cuddle,
The walk, in so many faces around,
The memory studded, every face so common.

The time at work, the food of thought,
Imagination subtle, togetherness and ruffle,
The text we exchange, the care divine,
Again the evening, a merrier sublime.

Starting back, a way to your love,
Those waiting eyes, an eternal reverence,
That timed bell, a feel of excitement,
Again that hug, the gratified reimburse.

19 Comments, RSS

  1. Dip August 13, 2012 @ 6:45 pm

    sweet πŸ™‚

  2. Chocolate Lover August 13, 2012 @ 6:54 pm

    Omg, how do you write so amazingly? o.o <3

  3. Sunny Parampil August 13, 2012 @ 6:55 pm

    Kya baat hai Ashu, this ones really mushy and romantic πŸ™‚ Well done bro πŸ™‚

  4. Dipak Mawale August 13, 2012 @ 7:07 pm

    loved it.. romantic.. i mean everyone can connect and can relate themselves in this poem.. keep it up πŸ™‚

  5. MANGESH NARAWADE August 13, 2012 @ 7:19 pm

    superbly written poem mate πŸ™‚
    True Masterpiece.

  6. SravanKumar Iyer August 13, 2012 @ 7:21 pm


  7. Yasmeen August 13, 2012 @ 7:34 pm

    So beautiful and lovely..you really have a gift Win =)

    Keep them coming

  8. mahimakukreja August 13, 2012 @ 8:25 pm

    Superb, flows beautifully. A reason with every rhyme, that's why I like.

  9. Shailesh Thorat August 13, 2012 @ 8:50 pm

    Amazing verses… beautiful words πŸ™‚

  10. Arpita August 14, 2012 @ 4:42 am

    you are my rhythm divine you are my love….how beautifully u have covered the little feelings the heart feels πŸ™‚ loved it ..cheers πŸ™‚

  11. amit kumar pandey August 14, 2012 @ 4:50 am

    bade romantic hote ja rahe ho brother….:) its a nice one…i really liked its wordings…perfect…!!

  12. nishi August 14, 2012 @ 5:27 am

    sweet and cute:)

  13. sneha mehta August 14, 2012 @ 7:50 am

    Lovely!!! Sweet!! Awesome!

  14. writersrelam August 14, 2012 @ 8:53 am

    The way I see it,
    X is Missing Y and Is desperately Waiting for Y to Arrive so that X can meet her and fall head over heel in love all over again.
    In the Meanwhile, Did I forget to say that this is an awesome Post and I loved it too too much? πŸ˜›

  15. mehfil-e-poonam August 14, 2012 @ 11:59 am

    Again beautiful one Ashwin.. Lovely :))

  16. Mirchi Laddoo August 14, 2012 @ 4:13 pm

    Cool πŸ™‚

  17. Saya August 14, 2012 @ 6:13 pm

    Amazing one!

    "Yawn says, kiss me much,
    The start of the day, miss you much."
    These lines my personal fav! πŸ™‚

  18. Rutaba August 18, 2012 @ 12:26 pm

    This lightens me :D. I read it again and again to only feel so fluffy inside ^_^

  19. Ashwin D August 18, 2012 @ 12:50 pm

    Thanks all πŸ™‚

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