The Solacing Touch

A comfort there is, in her touch
More of the allured grace,
A bit of the clean mess,
The dismantled solace.

A beat in her memories, breeze..
Survival so dependent, surreal enough..
To make me more attracted, in vicinity..
Of her ears.

She had it in her, a beautiful shine..
Amazed or Aghast, can you define?
Oh! the feeling when she caresses you.. Sigh
I feel incompletely, alive.

No the breathe, is not so important though..
I feel she sniffs, heartbeats inclined..
Towards her, still a bit stray
to confuse her peaceful mind..

Distance, we call a bitch, not so cool..
Relief you get, you meet your beloved after the pine..
that different quilt of lips,
on none other than mine..

A lip kept on hers, so mesmerizing,
the world experienced, heavenly chime..
Beguiling her consistency, to lure me..
in the chunk of  moments, valued forever..

32 Comments, RSS

  1. Mirchi Laddoo August 21, 2012 @ 1:10 pm

    So Romantic!!! πŸ™‚

  2. writersrelam August 21, 2012 @ 1:12 pm

    Mushy Mushy Romance, Nice it is But then I'd Like to know If It was dedicated to someone or not πŸ˜‰
    Cheerio!!!

  3. Aparajita Singh August 21, 2012 @ 1:20 pm

    awwww hotness and romance..mixed so classicly loved it πŸ˜€

  4. Sang August 21, 2012 @ 1:21 pm

    Romance at its best ashu..keep it going .:) -dundu

  5. Sang August 21, 2012 @ 1:21 pm

    Romance at its best ashu..keep it going .:) -dundu

  6. camouflagedwhispers August 21, 2012 @ 1:27 pm

    ahem ahem πŸ˜‰

  7. Chandresh Gupta August 21, 2012 @ 1:49 pm

    Nice one bhai… πŸ™‚

  8. Zeal Shah August 21, 2012 @ 2:05 pm

    Nice1 ashwin!!

  9. Muhammad Faisal Rahat. August 21, 2012 @ 2:12 pm

    Brilliant! πŸ™‚

  10. Shailesh Thorat August 21, 2012 @ 2:36 pm

    I bet you have one of the horcruxes of Romeo that still stands un-destroyed , producing gems like these.. Super! πŸ™‚

  11. DesiGuy August 21, 2012 @ 2:56 pm

    Excellent bro πŸ™‚

  12. Ashwin D August 21, 2012 @ 5:20 pm

    Thanks Laddoo πŸ™‚

  13. Ashwin D August 21, 2012 @ 5:21 pm

    Thank you Mister πŸ˜‰

  14. Ashwin D August 21, 2012 @ 5:21 pm

    Thank you App πŸ™‚

  15. Ashwin D August 21, 2012 @ 5:21 pm

    Appreciate it Dundu πŸ™‚

  16. Ashwin D August 21, 2012 @ 5:22 pm

    Vicks ki goli leke padha karo mere posts madam πŸ˜›

  17. Ashwin D August 21, 2012 @ 5:22 pm

    Thanks mate πŸ™‚

  18. Ashwin D August 21, 2012 @ 5:23 pm

    Thanks Zeal πŸ™‚

  19. Ashwin D August 21, 2012 @ 5:23 pm

    Appreciate the read man.. πŸ™‚ Thanks

  20. Ashwin D August 21, 2012 @ 5:24 pm

    Wow, you always amaze me by your comment Joe πŸ™‚ Thanks broda.. Be blessed

  21. Ashwin D August 21, 2012 @ 5:24 pm

    Thanks Ash πŸ™‚

  22. Shraviii August 21, 2012 @ 5:53 pm

    A very good 1… Very Subtle

  23. Tulika August 21, 2012 @ 7:46 pm

    So Much of Love! πŸ˜€ Bless you with more of it Always. πŸ˜‰

  24. Arpita August 22, 2012 @ 5:10 am

    Dipped in love a kiss of romance and a bliss of heaven…beautifully written ashwin πŸ™‚ cheers

  25. nishi August 22, 2012 @ 5:51 am

    Its cute, Touching, and to me it seems like something that came from your heart! keep up the poetry!

  26. HM August 22, 2012 @ 9:03 am

    Awwww!! Love this one ashu!! πŸ˜€

  27. Ashwin D August 22, 2012 @ 9:57 am

    Thanks mate πŸ™‚

  28. Ashwin D August 22, 2012 @ 9:58 am

    Appreciate it Tula πŸ™‚ Thanks, wish you more as well πŸ˜‰

  29. Ashwin D August 22, 2012 @ 9:59 am

    πŸ™‚ thanks appu for your kind words πŸ™‚ God bless

  30. Ashwin D August 22, 2012 @ 9:59 am

    Indeed it came from the heart, all my works are directly from heart πŸ™‚ thanks Nishi

  31. Ashwin D August 22, 2012 @ 10:00 am

    Thanks you πŸ™‚

  32. camouflagedwhispers August 22, 2012 @ 11:33 am

    haha πŸ˜€

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

*

CommentLuv badge