The Repealable Theory

A step they took, a move they made,
The official announcement of the unsaid,
The touch they had, the genes they gave,
A part of us inside they had.

A life we got, a boon they gave,
Surroundings surreal, an impeccable strain,
Somethings we loved, a bit we hate,
They call it Life, we called it spade.

The more we did, the more they taught,
A bit we felt unreal, a deceiving thought,
Should we give more or should we not?
Experiences denied, but heart said it all.

The age unclad, the body so sad,
A heart young now, appeal so clear,
The strength went fade, a kiss on the cage,
With never opening box, coffin busted.

5 Comments, RSS

  1. writersrelam July 14, 2012 @ 2:22 pm

    Story of Life.. All said & yet left Unsaid 😉 Nice one Liked it lad..

  2. Pramod J. July 14, 2012 @ 2:37 pm

    well written bro 🙂 liked it

  3. 3.14-eater July 17, 2012 @ 3:08 pm

    Fairly good choice of words…

  4. Dipak Mawale July 19, 2012 @ 5:33 pm

    Awesome Awesome Awesome as Always 🙂 Keep it up bro.. miss you a lot on my TL 🙁 God bless you bro

  5. Pramod J. October 5, 2012 @ 5:07 pm

    Well written bro 🙂 Liked it

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