The Moon Walk

A wink they started with the step,

Holding hands together smoothly they went,
They knew the path was long and could strain,
but the faith along showed them some end.

A minute to be stopped, and stare,
A glance of the dew drops withheld,
The glide on the universe they felt,
Some way in the eternity they had to melt.

Colors of life they smelled, beauty so heard,
The colloquial language of lips, so blunt,
still the placid light on their arms so punk,
A voice so jittery, a moment making him so monk.

The celestial tears, the galaxy so smeared,
still the walk without the fear, and lull,
A grip so fine, the momentary nib divine,
even the stars got stuck, said “No Sunshine”

The beauty of her legs, the duty of his pegs,
The wind so surreal, the journey so kind,
The lean so soothe, the mood so clean,
They said “Let us stay here, overnight.”

21 Comments, RSS

  1. Dipak Mawale July 6, 2012 @ 6:11 pm is so romantic.. loved it very much πŸ™‚ you should seriously think of writing a book man.. you are damm awesome with the words πŸ™‚ keep it up πŸ™‚

  2. sneha mehta July 6, 2012 @ 6:13 pm

    It is beautiful.. Each word can be visualized and felt and well, yeah, be recalled.



  3. mehfil-e-poonam July 6, 2012 @ 6:13 pm

    Nice Ashwin πŸ™‚

  4. writersrelam July 6, 2012 @ 6:17 pm

    Nice and Romantic I say.. Sad part, I didnt get a Demo of it on Twitter this time πŸ˜‰ *Runs*

  5. Tanmay Satpathy July 6, 2012 @ 6:19 pm

    Lovely πŸ™‚

  6. Shafqat Amanat Ali Fan July 6, 2012 @ 6:43 pm

    Touches the soul..

  7. Zeal Shah July 6, 2012 @ 6:59 pm

    Simply touches the heart & soul and it is very pleasant to read all ur blogs… they are simply awesome…:) keep up the good work ashu πŸ™‚

  8. anonymousnerd July 6, 2012 @ 7:02 pm

    God one yar!! i wish i could ever write like that. πŸ™‚

  9. Yasmeen July 6, 2012 @ 7:14 pm

    So beautiful! Nicely written Win πŸ˜€

  10. SravanKumar Iyer July 6, 2012 @ 7:28 pm

    Speechless ashu… Ur best 1 i wud say… It wad as if i was reading william wordsworth… Gr8 joy to read….

  11. SravanKumar Iyer July 6, 2012 @ 7:28 pm

    Speechless ashu… Ur best 1 i wud say… It wad as if i was reading william wordsworth… Gr8 joy to read….

  12. crazy diamond July 6, 2012 @ 7:36 pm

    loved the last 4 lines πŸ™‚

  13. Tulika July 6, 2012 @ 9:03 pm

    Just Amazing! πŸ˜€ Could Connect well. πŸ˜‰

  14. amit kumar pandey July 6, 2012 @ 9:16 pm

    it took much time to understand n feel it completly…..ftrall…it was more than i expected…touches the heart..good one bro..:)

  15. NIRALI July 7, 2012 @ 4:28 am

    Beautifully expressed, really nice.

  16. Sunny Parampil July 7, 2012 @ 8:59 am

    Beautifully written, last 4 lines were the deal clinchers for me πŸ˜‰

  17. Mirchi Laddoo July 7, 2012 @ 9:09 am


  18. Abhijeet July 8, 2012 @ 6:11 am


  19. Kaushal Mahesh Gupta July 8, 2012 @ 1:12 pm

    Awesome is the word buddy!!!

  20. Yasmeen July 15, 2012 @ 4:42 pm

    Please come back on twitter, aise nahi karo yaar..whatever the problem is solve it! Don't leave twitter you have so many friends there who miss you..

    Sorry I had to write here cause I didn't know any other place to contact you, come soon Win ='(


  21. Pramod J. October 5, 2012 @ 5:07 pm

    lovely and beautiful.. very well written bro πŸ™‚

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