Who am i?

A person who is blessing, a human in dressing,
the way one should live, or the love’s caressing,
the delight of a smile, the occupants divine,
the feeling of a sorrow, the immediate despair thorough.
Someone who is blessed, but still in making mistakes,
Someone who does borrow, the inmate’s slate,
Someone who loves selfless, and is proved to be late,
the messenger you bought, still he is unpaid.
A son in disguise, a brother not so bright,
the student of Life, but still brushing up insights,
A tyro spiritualist, they say got to learn more,
Sometimes i feel i have passed the degree to the core.
Responsible you have to be, a lesson to be learnt,
Laziness is in you, the perfect paper to be burnt,
Growing up has saturated, now retain the wisdom,
Live Life as it comes through, better make it Huge.

13 Comments, RSS

  1. writersrelam June 23, 2012 @ 10:01 am

    Loved the last Line of the lot, Good one!

  2. Manoj M June 23, 2012 @ 10:04 am

    Very nicely Written!

  3. Suhel June 23, 2012 @ 10:19 am

    It was such a pleasant read, I really loved the last verse :))

    Hey, I got a suggestion though (which I was given by an English author on a Poetry website) whenever you use i capitilize it.. not a hardcore rule but still it emphasises the pronoun. πŸ™‚

  4. amit kumar pandey June 23, 2012 @ 10:25 am

    liked it bro….well written….

  5. tripti June 23, 2012 @ 10:31 am

    awesome!! keep writing, you have a long way ahead. πŸ™‚ β™₯

  6. Yasmeen June 23, 2012 @ 12:07 pm

    Super!! Very well written..keep them coming Win! πŸ˜€

  7. Harsh Mehta June 23, 2012 @ 12:43 pm

    Well said dude.. πŸ™‚

  8. Mirchi Laddoo June 23, 2012 @ 5:35 pm

    Really Awesome!!!

  9. Dipak Mawale June 23, 2012 @ 9:12 pm

    Super liked it.. very well written.. very creative.. this goes to my all time favorite πŸ™‚

  10. Sunny Parampil June 23, 2012 @ 10:35 pm

    Nice πŸ™‚

  11. Arpita June 27, 2012 @ 11:40 am

    really deep thoughts πŸ™‚

  12. 3.14-eater July 3, 2012 @ 11:23 am

    A son in disguise, a brother not so bright,
    the student of Life, but still brushing up insights,
    A tyro spiritualist, they say got to learn more,….

    Nice work.

  13. Phoenix February 7, 2013 @ 11:38 am

    Someone who is blessed, but still in making mistakes,
    Someone who does borrow, the inmate's slate,
    Someone who loves selfless, and is proved to be late,
    the messenger you bought, still he is unpaid.

    Loved these lines…

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