That Beguiling Alleviation (STOEM)

It was the time of new year, things had just moved on in a new phase. Life had become smooth and it felt this was meant to happen. His birthday had just passed, the new year eve also went well bringing a lot of surprises for him in store. He decided to meet her for the first time. Yes it was too special and he had to make it happen as they both were desperate. 
The feelings inside were as:
“Oh love, we were meant to be and finally it has come to thee,
We were born for each other dear, come to me come to me,
Tears have dried now the heart can’t wait, Oh baby,
The distance has to go, sweetheart in my arms within”
He knew that he was pure and the feelings were mutually divine and whoever takes the step, they had to meet to quench that thirst of soul by just that one divine touch. He managed to get over all the obstacles and took over his best friend to the place where this beautiful soul resided. The journey was too long as both have waited a lot since they were in to relationship.Any amount of time since you get committed is too long before you see each other and feel it. No matter how much we say that the distance doesn’t matter but it somewhere does because we all are humans and we need the caress. She was not informed about the arrival. He was in that bus in that sleeper coach brooding over the first meet.
The feelings inside were as:
“Distance covered is making me feel so exciting,
Oh honey, i feel i could just fly away and be there in a moment,
The first Look, The first Touch, The first Kiss, The first Hug,
I am thinking about you and this journey is all the worth”
They were talking on messages and still he didn’t let her know that tomorrow is the day they will see each other for the first time. She didn’t even realize it and he was playing along well to keep the surprise. He and his friend were listening to songs while travelling, having fun, and he was so excited that he couldn’t sleep much through the journey even. All the time he was thinking about how he would react when he would first see her, in fact more than 100 times he had imagined the way, the situation would occur they would have their first glance on each other. It was morning and the sun rays started coming up and the driver was taking too long ways and making it late. It was not his fault because he never knew that a bird sitting in his bus has come all the way to meet another bird. Last two hours they said it would take to reach the destination. He messaged her that he is in her city with a good morning message. She was shocked, surprised, amazed, happy, dancing, her eyes just popped up reading that. She called me after a while and was sounding so different. Confused, happy, joyful and what not. That was the best feeling to be heard. He reached the destination and found a place to stay. She started preparations to come and meet him.
The feelings inside were as:
“Honey you have made we wait so much,
Don’t make it long now we have nothing between as such,
Walk, Run, Fly and come to me to hug,
Every second is making me feel like a tug”
The time came when the call came that she is here. Oh, his heartbeats went faster and the first glance was just impeccable and as  the distance between both lessened the desperation increased and as soon as they were nearest they just HUGGED. Without a word, without a moment waiting they just clung to each other as if they were magnets. They both could just listen to each other’s heart beats, eyes were closed and the soul was quenched. Time seemed to stop at that moment and for the last 2 minutes they just were lost in to each other. He felt it was the most divine thing ever happened to him. She felt it was the most worthy moment of her Life.
The feelings inside were as:
“You came, you touched, you made me pure,
I was a mere piece of body so obscure,
Hold thy hand i will always walk the path,
Princess, he said we will live a lovely life for sure”
Hands in hands they walked. Enjoyed the ride over different places. The love, the touch, the kiss, the stare, the amazing feeling was at par just he couldn’t describe it in words. The time spent at that place of solitude and the love they made was just beyond words, time and life. A day more and she left behind everything just to be with her, hold hands and just walk away whole day and stare him to the max. It was the time he had to leave then and it was being tough for both as the evening was coming, when he had to leave and go where he came from. Tears couldn’t stop for both and the last few minutes were too heavy but still they managed to smile and run the show.
The feelings inside were as:
“Leaving we are each other today, just to meet soon,
Eyes, heart, brain are numb, yes we know,
We have met so differently, we were meant to be,
Darling this is good start, we will have an amazing spree”

10 Comments, RSS

  1. Mirchi Laddoo May 31, 2012 @ 8:34 am

    That anticipation of meeting them for the first time..
    Where you already know you are meant to be together forever..
    Where you don't care how poor are you by the dime..
    That moment which you will let go never ๐Ÿ™‚
    Beautifully described my dear friend! <3

  2. Swapnil Kalollu May 31, 2012 @ 8:43 am

    A romance beautiful enough.. Captured in words.. the First touch, Kiss the embrace.. The first feeling of being special.. to someone special!

  3. Sunny Parampil June 3, 2012 @ 5:36 pm

    No doubt this was romantic… Interesting thing this bringing back fond memories… you've written this so well I felt you were there to witness everything. Well done mate ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. camouflagedwhispers June 3, 2012 @ 7:56 pm

    Beautiful.. Love the way it's penned down. ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Aditi June 4, 2012 @ 7:30 am

    definitely beautiful… but are they prepared for the future… pain and only pain…

  6. Ashwin D June 5, 2012 @ 8:22 pm

    Sunny Bhai- Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚

    Soma- Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚

    Adi- They have gone through a lot already, waiting for now just the best ๐Ÿ™‚

    Thanks for reading folks ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Jakash Dabhi June 22, 2012 @ 5:43 pm

    aah man.. I can proudly say.. "I lived in the times of this truth…" ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Jakash Dabhi June 22, 2012 @ 5:47 pm

    but one thing would love to say… the end needed bit more words… it need a smooth end, not the fast end.

    Only my suggestion

  9. Saheli July 1, 2012 @ 4:36 pm

    I LOVE THIS! ๐Ÿ˜€
    keep writing!!

  10. anonymousnerd July 5, 2012 @ 5:50 pm

    this is a part that can't be penned down nor felt unless experienced trust me ๐Ÿ™‚ beautifully written ๐Ÿ™‚

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