Woman- Can this be defined?

With all the due respect for all the women i am jotting down what i feel now πŸ™‚

Forms are different but one can you say,
do you really know what it want to convey,
what she is and what she does?
No you really don’t have any idea away.

Gives her she hands to caresse and kiss,
What you give her, the kitchen and fish,
Gives her she herself to felt loved so much,
you give her all the time the anger and guilt.

Cares, Cooks, Cums she on your holy wish,
what more can you expect from her so thin?
Shout you on her when she did a little mistake,
See yourself within did she ever judge you so clean?

Form of a mother she takes you everytime in her arms,
Form of a wife she gives all the power strong,
Form a sister she encourages you in the dorm,
Form a teacher she is a mentor to the time.

Make you her a toy and paying makes you feel rich,
just look in the mirror if someone sells you for a cent,
how would you feel if you are measured in currency?
Come on grow up and get out of that tendency.

Wears when she shorts you whistle, tease and harass her a lot,
why does she fear to expose herself or feel comfortable?
its because you have induced her with that caterpillar set of rules,
that Woman you need not to show that which is post the seven tools.

Less are these words to define her as a whole,
what she craves for is the only Respect sole,
if you can’t give her that a pinch little,
Go spit on your birth and flow in a stinky river.

11 Comments, RSS

  1. Shruti Mehendale March 9, 2012 @ 9:24 am

    Nice poem with lot of depth ….

  2. Ashwin D March 9, 2012 @ 9:37 am

    Thanks Shruti ji πŸ™‚

  3. Savar Suri March 9, 2012 @ 10:06 am

    Respect to u bro!!

  4. Ashwin D March 9, 2012 @ 10:42 am

    Thanks Savar πŸ™‚

  5. Sugar N Spice March 19, 2012 @ 2:09 pm

    Totally proud to know someone like you πŸ™‚
    Loved each and every line and u did addressed all issues women of today might face πŸ™‚
    You are someone who can bring a change in the mindset…keep up the good work always πŸ™‚

    God bless πŸ™‚

  6. Ashwin D March 19, 2012 @ 2:13 pm

    Thanks a lot for all the appreciation πŸ™‚ God bless πŸ™‚

  7. Aparajita Singh August 21, 2012 @ 1:00 pm

    Lovely πŸ˜€

  8. Arpita October 5, 2012 @ 6:31 am

    loved every bit of emotion and every word of it πŸ™‚ if every guy was like you every girl would be more happier:)

  9. Forum October 28, 2012 @ 12:19 pm

    Nice πŸ™‚

  10. ravenousforlife February 27, 2013 @ 4:08 am


  11. Rebellious Submission April 24, 2013 @ 10:31 am

    A fab one…I many a times feel frustrated being a woman..You know how things are with Indian society…Feels happy to read it coming from a guy..

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