Is Cheating Intentional or Natural?

The emotion and the hug so tight it feels,
The trust within and the mighty plight it reels,
The fly in those airy wind and the blowy blows,
The first rain and the drop makes it pinching a bit.
The desperation and the fear at the same time it calls,
The needle like it pricks and the taste like the salt,
The tears and the deep inside insecurities we feel,
The unspoken drudgery of the past comes and kills.
The habit so long and the blood studded ethics,
The feeling of ditch and the kick as bitches,
The difference here is not about any specific sex,
The coming calls with the long time misunderstandings.
The life long truths and the promises unbroken,
The faith, hope, love you expected untrodden,
The blame you give uselessly to each other,
The fate says baby its all there already written.

4 Comments, RSS

  1. Karan Gurnani March 19, 2012 @ 10:47 am

    nice language, good use of punctuations, nice concept, i wish it was longer…! πŸ™‚

  2. Ashwin D March 19, 2012 @ 10:57 am

    Thanks Karu, but had some long ones recently so kept it short πŸ™‚ thanks fr reading and appreciating brother. Much love πŸ™‚

  3. Sugar N Spice March 19, 2012 @ 2:00 pm

    Beautiful πŸ™‚ For a moment made me speechless as I could feel the pain as it was described πŸ™‚

    Lovely expressions….keep up the good work πŸ™‚

  4. Saheli July 1, 2012 @ 4:39 pm

    Liked this a lot too. πŸ˜‰

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